Wall of Mouths

Hooch’s mum wrote:

It’s still quite a good idea to check your spelling! :p

so what do you think of my story then?

The story is to be located in an unnamed suburban American city
The story will be set in peoples houses, aboard a spaceship In a college and in the streets.
CHARACTERS

Justin Mathews
early 20’s
lives with his parents
Has no Brothers or Sister
only recently moved into this city from Los Angles
Has only just started his new college
used to be really popular in Los Angles
Is an extrovert
Is a very keen American Football player
Likes whatever everyone else likes
Is a follower

Brock Kennedy
early 20’s
Lives with his mum and sister
college student
he has a sister called Sarah
Has always been very popular and had lots of friends
nasty to his sister
Is an extrovert
Plays American football although he has no real talent at it
all his friends tend to follow his fashion sense and taste in music
he is a leader

Sarah Kennedy
Early 20’s
Lives with mum and brother
college student
Has a Brother called Brock
Has always been a social outcast
her brother is nasty to her
Is an introvert
Jacob Smith has a secret crush on her
has a talent for painting abstract images
always dressed in black
likes music that was once popular but now isnt
Fear of money and success
has a very dark sense of humor
is a leader
distances herself from other people.

Judith Simmons
early 50’s
A lecturer at the college
lives on her own in an apartment
her husband died a few years ago
Has a huge intrest in paranormal things
delivers lectures on theorys of evolution
Doesnt get on with the other lectures as they think shes crazy
is an introvert
spends her time trying to find evidence of Aliens exsistence
believes that aliens evolved from humans

Jacob Smith
early ’20s
college student
lives with his mum dad and younger brother and sisters
is Brock Kennedys best friend
secreltly fancies Brocks siter Sarah but when with Brock
always puts her down and his mean to her
Is really talent at American Football
Is always in fights maily because Brock winds him up into getting in fights

SYNOPOSIS

A dark foggy night, black sky a flying saucer flys past.
A shot of a college on a sunny day, people entering it, Brock and Jacob walking together with 5 other people, Sarah walking in front of them, they’re shouting at Sarah. Justin gets out of car, immediately goes to talk to Brock and his gang, he tries really hard to impress them, they tell him to get lost. Justin doesnt know where hes going so asks Sarah for directions she tells him where to go and tells him that its not worth talking to Brock and his gang, they walk past and shout stuff at Sarah, Justin joins in. Justin arrives at a lecture, he sits down next to Jacob, Sarah sits in front, Justin goes to say something to her but Jacob tells him to leave it.. Judith enters room and starts giving a lecture regarding aliens. After the lecture Brock is waiting outside for Justin and Jacob, Justin then starts shouting stuff at Sarah. Sarah lying in a bed, her mum shouts her to wake up she opens her eyes but cant move and sees a shadow flash past. She regains conciousness. She goes downstaris for breakfast, her mum and brock are at the table brock is being mean to her. In college Justin, Jacob and Sarah are in Judith’s lecture, she talks about signs of Alien abduction. After the lecture Sarah looks at her watch the time says 11.00 pm, she gets lost and looks at it again and it says 12.00, she then wakes up unsure wether all of that was a dream or not. Jacob who lives across the road looks out his window looking worried and distressed,

Hooch’s mum wrote:

:mad:

I will smack you in the mouth then!

And if it’s your English coursework you will need to remember to write you’re when it’s short for ‘you are’ :)

no its media studies

Hooch’s mum wrote:

I will smack them in the mouth then :mad:

no your the aliens ;)

Hooch’s mum wrote:

Damn :( I wouldn’t know where to start.

How are you? And Mrs Dr Bomb? Having a good weekend?

your in it, cus sarahs mum wakes her and brock up, but sarah becomes paralised by the aliens and cant wake up ;)

hitler was austrian his mum was a jew and hitler was black

hitlers against the things he is

so he must be gay as well :)

dj lethal wrote:

I resent that… im not actualy green :P

-lethal

are you a black gay austrian nazi?

dj lethal wrote:

isn’t that a type of green vegetable?

-dj lethal

no but you are ;)

hoochalobster wrote:

Hoovering? At this hour? I’m outraged on your behalf. Also pretty outraged that my sister has been home for nearly 20 minutes and I still don’t have a cup of tea.

you mean your brother called brock ;)

hoochalobster wrote:

That’s okay - except it’s a bit embarrassing to still be in school if I’m in my 20’s…

I like the music thing ;)

its a college ;)

or you got held back 6 years.

hoochalobster wrote:

Result! Woohoo :D So tell me more about this love interest…

hang on I havent wrote about him yet.

for the benifit of the story I have tweaked your character if any of my tweeks offend you speak now or forever hold your silence.

Sarah Kennedy
Mid 20’s
Lives with mum and brother
Has a Brother called Brock
Has always been a social outcast
although in school her brother is nasty to her at home they get on pretty well
Is an introvert
She secretly has a crush on new kid Justin Matthews and Adam Smith has a secret crush on her
has a talent for painting abstract images
always dressed in black
likes music that was once popular but now isnt

to be contiuned

yes you are Sarah

Your this Jock guys wierd sister, who no one likes, but one of the other Jocks is secretly in love with and attempts to rescue after she gets abducted by UFO’s :)

hoochalobster wrote:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=259478

and also

http://www.amiright.com/parody/60s/buddyholly0.shtml

by the same person…

no therapy? parodies :(

White Psycho wrote:

Justin Matthews sounds like the guy from that cartoon Galaxy High.

you wanna be in my story?

if so describe yourself

Coursework is soo o fun

any of you want your names in my media studies film?

gotta get 7 characters for a sci fi film right a synopisis ad storyboard it

heres all i got at the moment

RESEARCH

The story is to be located in an unnamed suburban American city
The story will be set in peoples houses, aboard a spaceship In a college and in the streets.
CHARACTERS

Justin Mathews
early 20’s
lives with his parents
Has no Brothers or Sister
only recently moved into this city from Los Angles
Has only just started his new college
used to be really popular in Los Angles
Is an extrovert
Is a very keen American Football player

Kid_Disco wrote:

still a natural urge that irrepressable

typing this is regrattable

matthew wrote:

But, ya know, with our asses we do the unthinkable…

this bands music is drinkable

Squall wrote:

But after a while it may become unpalletable :D

your face is kinda slappable

Hooch’s mum wrote:

Hello WP :)

No - you are more of a ‘bewildered’ inmate :D

dont say hi to me then :(

Squall wrote:

I’m immensely huggable :)

if you looked good id say you were fuckable

I guess ill spend today on the WoM , anyone wanna make me be entertained?

Squall wrote:

I find that rather unbelievable

awwww bless squall hes kinda a bit loveable

Squall wrote:

Your Spelling is laughable :D

just cus ive seen your ass and balls

Squall wrote:

Thats the trouble with tribbles !

squall is a bit gullable

Squall wrote:

Now you’re just making me dribble

i think this thread is so damn terrible

seriousley go to HArfordwest and everyone looks like a cheap rip off of Ginger,

Squall wrote:

I have never been known to dabble :D

change the rhyming word, start a fresh quibble

every dude under 18 in Wales looks either like ginger, someone from goldie lookin chain or the twat from Aiden

:)

Squall wrote:

perfectly acceptable :D

kinda think you are satanical

Squall wrote:

Just coz you have a dead language and are shit :D

your welsh mate